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The story is that of the doorman and ties to feelings of community this Christmas. Possibly brings around a redeeming end to each individual story as well as tells his own story in the process. Something from his story may go against preconceived notions that the congregation may have been set up to have of him. etc etc etc.

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Cowps edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 12/21/2010. Cowps made 37 other changes. more
judge
Wow. Can you believe that? The bum...
(changes his tone)
...that guy, Elijah! He is a changed man.
(looks back at the hotel)
What is it about this place? It really is special.
( Judge gets sentimental)
Yes...this place is special. I can't help think about how special this place is, especially this time of year. Long ago, my family and I were caught in a snow storm...very much like this one. And it was Christmas eve. We were SO close to home, but all the roads were closed and we had to stay at a hotel. I never forgot it. The man that owned the hotel knew that me and my sister would miss out on Christmas morning and that he went out in the middle of the night and got us presents...he even got a tree and all the decorations. I relive that morning every Christmas in my mind. It's not difficult to do so,
(pauses in reflection)
because THIS was that hotel we stayed at and Ray's dad was the hotel owner that made that Christmas so special. He opened the doors of his heart to make the Christmas memorable for me and my family. Now, I open those doors there, for people to make a memory too.
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Cowps added dialogue in "This is your first scene." on 11/02/2010. Cowps made 56 other changes. more
judge
Wow. Can you believe that? The bu...
(changes his tone)
...that guy, Elijah! He is a changed man.
(looks back at the hotel)
What is it about this place? It really is special.
( Judge gets sentimental)
Yes...this place is special. I can't help think about how special this place is, especially this time of year. Long ago, my family and I were caught in a snow storm...very much like this one. And it was Christmas eve. We were SO close to home, but all the roads were closed and we had to stay at a hotel. I never forgot it. The man that owned the hotel knew that me and my sister would miss out on Christmas morning adn that he went out in the middle of the night and got us presents...he even got a tree and all the decorations. I relive that morning every Christmas in my mind. It's not difficult to do so, because this was that hotel we stayed at and Ray's dad was the hotel owner that made that Christmas so special. He opened the doors of his heart to make the Christmas memorable for me and my family. Now, I open those doors there, for people to make a memory too.
 

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