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maxarion commented on an action. on 03/15/2011.
maxarion commented on an action. on 03/15/2011 [view]
i like it, but i think the first shot should be an establishing shot, showing the guests arriving. it would give more melancholy, you can delay introducing the main character and increase her importance (especially with the right music in the background) and the suicide attempt would have a greater payoff
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