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This is your first scene. Last edited by Megan06, two years ago. 0 comments. More scene info.

INT. Officer shawn's house party night

Megan06 - two years ago

INSPECTOR JOHN and the NORRISVILLE POLICE are having a grand time celebrating OFFICER NEWTON'S retirement. Some officers drank beer and soda, as others were dancing around to the radio. But, INSPECTOR JOHN just stood by the punch table and watched.

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OFFICER SARAH noticed the INSPECTOR and briskly walked up to him. Then, she leaned against the table beside him.

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OFFICER SARAH (smirks)

Oh come on INSPECTOR JOHN, relax a little will ya? It's a party, ya know!

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INSPECTOR JOHN (SHRUGS h

What are you talking about? I am relaxed, see?

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OFFICER SARAH looks at the INSPECTOR with a unconvinced expression.

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OFFicer sarah (rolls eye

YEAAAhhh sure, INSPECTOR. Well, I'm going to continue being an awesome partier while I'm off duty. Come and join in when you're ready JOHN.

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OFFICER SARAH dances away and left the INSPECTOR at the punch bowl and carried away in his own thoughts

Megan06 - two years ago

Suddenly the power went off and there was a horrific scream. The INSPECTOR stood up straight and his police instincts were kicking in.

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The power quickly comes back and the crowd is frozen. Several people looked down and gasped at the floor and then the living room mirror.

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INSPECTOR rushed into the room and froze as he saw the white haired OFFICER NEWTON, dead in a pool of his blood and above him, written in his blood "GET OUT" on the mirror.

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