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LynnMoody edited dialogue in "blah." two years ago. more
Marilyn
(Crying)
Michael, you were the best husband anyone could ever ask for.
(Pause)
You were my best friend, the love of my life, and my wonderful and loving husband. You were the best father Aidan could ever have and no one will ever be able to take your place.
(Pause and wipes a tear from her eyes)
Michael's ability to make everyone feel comfortable, secure and loved were his greatest strengths. I remember the first time I saw him - I looked over the room at the dance hall on a Saturday night and saw this handsome man. I was too shy initially to even hold his eye contact, but I did look out for him every Saturday night. Eventually he introduced himself to me; we danced, we laughed and we fell in love.
(Pauses to look up at the sky and smiles)
My husband was a hard working man. He put his all into everything he ever did. He put his life on the line so we could sleep peacefully at night. For that I thank him. I was never scared because I knew that he would be there protecting me. Michael was my soul mate and my inspiration – my steadfast rock that helped me through thick and thin. He may be in heaven now, but I know he is looking down at us with a big smile on his face saying, “Forge ahead – make the best of life – and I’ll see you soon. We have work to do up here, too.” Goodbye, my dear, sweet husband, and god bless.
(cries harder and walks back toward Aidan)
LynnMoody inserted dialogue in "blah." two years ago. LynnMoody made 10 other changes. more
Priest
God our Father, we thank you now for all his life, for every memory of love and joy, for every good deed done by him and every sorrow shared with us. We thank you for his life and for his death, we thank you for the rest in Christ he now enjoys,we thank you for giving him to us,we thank you for the glory we shall share together.Hear our prayers through Jesus Christ our Lord.
LynnMoody edited an action in "Like father like son." two years ago. LynnMoody made 73 other changes. more
Cut to the next scene. Close up of all of the young men dressed in their ACUs while standing in formation. The camera then stops when it finally reaches Aidan. He's wearing his dad's dog tags.
LynnMoody added an action in "blah." two years ago. more
Long shot of the funeral. Marilyn, Aidan, and several members of their family and friends surround them.
LynnMoody edited a slugline in "blah." two years ago. LynnMoody made 28 other changes. more
INT. Georgia, 2 weeks after Michael's death.
 

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