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AssholeSandpaper edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." 5 days ago. AssholeSandpaper made 11 other changes. more
will:
Good, I can finally call this place. I could probably get a re-do if I can prove I was being mugged. I wonder if a doctor can write a note for that? Hello, yes this is Will Stevens...
AssholeSandpaper edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." 1 month ago. AssholeSandpaper made 20 other changes. more
news anchor: (CONT'D)
Police have provided a sketch taken from witnesses who saw him fleeing the scene and have identified him as 25 year old Danny Marskell. He is described as a caucasian man in his mid-20's, tall, with dark brown hair.
AssholeSandpaper edited an action in "This is your first scene." 1 month ago. AssholeSandpaper made 5 other changes. more
Blinds drawn, only a sliver of light enters, giving off a dim, uneasy vibe. The room has a dank, untidy, chaotic look to it, and a TV sits propped up on a stack of books, stuck on one channel in the corner, with clothes covering the rest of the floor space. JIMMY is pacing backwards and forwards, running his hands through his hair. He sits on his bed, trying to figure out what to do, but then sees the news report on the TV of DANNY. He sees that there is a $500 reward for anyone who can help bring him in. JIMMY's face lights up, and he leaps across to his desk, and begins to write and draw out plans, like a general in an army coming up with tactics and strategy for battle. An 80's style power montage happens of Jimmy drawing strategies, exercising in preparation, smoking from different pipes, and gearing up in tactical gear; George Clooney Batman-style. End on a backlit shot of Jimmy, all geared up, in a power stance, ready for anything.
AssholeSandpaper edited an action in "This is your first scene." 2 months ago. AssholeSandpaper made 11 other changes. more
MARK looks over at DANNY, but sees a man staring into the void, contemplating his very purpose in life. He realises he wont get a reaction out of him, so he picks up the remote and turns to DANNY.
AssholeSandpaper edited dialogue in "This is your first scene." 2 months ago. AssholeSandpaper made 98 other changes. more
WILL:
You know you can talk to me any time you need to man, any time. Except right now, I've got to get ready for this interview
 

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