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This is your first scene. Last edited by charliehamton, on 09/29/2011. 0 comments. More scene info.

int-hoover high school-day

charliehamton - on 09/29/2011

the camera pans down at the gym line where a bunch of students stand in a line, we stop at three who feel very uncomfortable, large man walks down the line staring at all of them with disgust

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coach GARRISON

you people are by far the ugliest,unfit,and just plain stupid students i have ever had to work with, is this what america is producing theses days god bless her but dang!,luckily the school system has asked me to whip you to shape so we can defend this great country

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gerrision stops and marches toward him.

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coach gerrision

Something funny tootsie roll!

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daniel

no sir

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nick

(chuckle) toosie roll

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alfredo

more like chocolate bar

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coach gerrision

well, well, well, it looks like we got our selves some comedians, well i got something real funny for ya!

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we cut to daniel alfredo and nick standing in a line together as the other students gather balls from the floor

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coach GARRISON

this is how we deal with smart aleck terrorist who finds it funny to mess with america!, on your mark

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daniel

this is so going to suck

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coach gerrision

get set

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alfredo

well at least will be healthy

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daniel

were going to be hit with balls alfredo how is that healthy

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alfredo

i'm an optimist

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nick

no your just an idioit

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coach gerrision

fire!

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the students attack daniel and the others with a wave of dodge balls, we cut to them in the locker room groaning

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daniel

okay, this has got to count as physical abuse

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nick

i think my pelvis is broken

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alfredo

my head hurts

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nick

yeah like that's new

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daniel

so what now

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