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David_P added dialogue in "McLoen Meets Man" on 03/29/2012. David_P made 27 other changes. more
Mcloen
Anything. You?
David_P added an action in "McLoen Meets Man" on 02/27/2012. more
MCLOEN STARES AT HIM FOR A LITTLE BIT THEN LOWERS HIS GUN.
David_P added dialogue in "McLoen Meets Man" on 02/26/2012. David_P made 56 other changes. more
DENNIS
No, I haven't.
David_P edited an action in "Introduction" on 02/03/2012. more
FROM BLACK THE SONG, "NEVADA TEST SITE" BY STINKY SMELLY STARTS PLAYING.AS THE DRUM ROLL STARTS, A LONG, SLOW FADE IN ON AN EXTREME CLOSE-UP OF THE GROUND BEGINS. IT'S AN EXTREMELY SUNNY DAY AND THE WIND TWIRLS THE DUST IN THE SHOT AROUND. SUDDENLY A FOOT STEPS INTO THE FRAME AS THE LINE "I CAN'T DIE BUT I'M BARELY ALIVE" ENDS. THE NEXT SERIES OF SHOTS ARE MORE EXTREME CLOSEUPS OF THE MAN, EMMETT MCLOEN. HIS BEARDED FACE SHOWS THAT IN THE PRESENT HE IS MCLOEN. WHEN HE IS A FEW YEARS YOUNGER, HIS CLEAN SHAVEN APPEARANCE SHOWS HIS FORMER SELF, EMMETT. WHAT FOLLOWS ARE DETAILED SHOTS OF HIS CLOTHES, DIRT SMEARED FACE, AND HIS SILENCED PISTOL STRAPPED TO HIS HIP. AS THESE CLIPS ARE PLAYING THE CREDITS WILL BE TITLED OVER. AS THE MUSIC CALMS, WE SEE MCLOEN SILHOUETTED AGAINST A HORIZON AMONGST SOME RUINS. WHAT FOLLOWS IS A MONTAGE OF MCLOENS DAY TO DAY LIFE; HUNTING,SCAVENGING,READING ETC. IN OTHER WORDS, WE SEE HIM ALONE IN HIS TEST SITE. AS THE MUSIC SWELLS, MCLOEN WALKS DOWN A DUSTY ROAD. A SILHOUETTE APPEARS FROM THE BUSHES NEARBY. MCLOEN LOOKS, THE FORM LUMBERS FORWARD, AND IN ONE MOTION MCLOEN DRAWS HIS PISTOL, AIMS, AND FIRES. THE CREATURE FALLS TO THE EARTH AND MCLOEN CAUTIOUSLY APPROACHES IT. HE BENDS DOWN TO LOOK CLOSER AT THE ZOMBIE AND SEES SOMETHING. AS HE LEANS CLOSER TO PICK IT UP, THE SCENE CUTS TO THE NEXT WITH THE DOWN-TEMPO TUNES FOLLOWING.
David_P edited dialogue in "First Encounter (Past)" on 02/02/2012. David_P made 19 other changes. more
Emmett
Speaking of fuck ups, where the hell is Jeff? He left before me.
 

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